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'Flesh Out' Your Death Knight

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10:05 pm
July 4, 2009


Cadistra

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Post edited 5:07 am – July 5, 2009 by Kelly


Hi everyone! Time for a role-playing exercise!

In this thread, I want you to write about your Death Knight. Now, to me, Death Knights are like cell phones – you just assume everyone has one, and when they don't, it seems strange and bizzare. So, if you don't have a Death Knight, I highly recommend rolling one, if only to do the beginning quest line. You can get it done in about 2.5-3 hours, and it's worth every second.

So, for this exercise, I want you to tell us about your DK. And please try and be creative! Original! I mean, if your Death Knight is simply a brooding sort of fellow, then, well, try and explain it well. ;3 You can write about any point in his/her life (existance?) you want, but I personally found the 'origin story' to be much easier. If you want to start out small, just write about their personality. =) You can either write the story here, or link to it if you have a blog/website.

As an example, here's my Death Knight, Surrma.

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     While many other tauren happily picked up a weapon to fight for the united cause, Surrma was more than content to tend to the most precious commodity – children. She lived with her mate within Thunder Bluff, and devoted her time, energy, and love to tending to the communal child care effort. Such was the way of things within the mighty tauren city – any children with parents on the battlefield, or any that were unfortunately orphaned, all stayed within the circle of elder females. Surrma, while considerably younger than most of the crones, was dutiful in her cause. She was pretty for a young female – not exceptionally beautiful, but certainly eye-catching. She had long hair, black as charcoal, with matching fur. Her eyes were two dark pools of chocolate brown, and a few glaring stripes of white broke the monotonous hue of her snout and cheeks. Her mate was a warrior, and a stalwart servant of Thrall's Horde. Together, they were a young family eager to grow.
    The unfortunate day came when her mate received the conscription to go to Northrend. “ Fear not, Surrma,” her mate had assured, gently holding her. “ I will only be at Warsong Hold for a short while. Then, after a few months, I will be able to return to you, and things will go back to normal.”
    Those were the last words he ever spoke to her.

    A few months had passed, and Surrma met each day with a brave, but drained smile. Every night, she used what feeble shamanistic powers she had, and prayed to the Earthmother and all of her elemental helpers that her husband would return safely. One drab morning, she was met by a young orc at the entrance to her tent. She wore a solemn expression, and before she could even open her mouth to speak, Surrma sank to the ground, weeping as she felt her heart rip apart.

    Weeks had passed, and the neighbouring crones began to worry for the young widow. All attempts to visit her were to no avail – any time she didn’t spend in a traumatic haze, or in a deep sleep, she would weep bitterly for her fallen mate. She rarely, if ever, left her hut, and a few overly-concerned older tauren worried at the sounds of her speaking to seemingly no one. Surrma’s insane ramblings began to make them worry, and they begged her to talk to another person, if at least enjoy some fresh air and sunshine. The ebony tauren vehemently refused, and stayed within her darkened home.
    Eventually, a few stubborn crones entered into her tent, and found that she was fat with a child. She had conceived shortly before her mate left, just like they had always wanted. By this point, though, the agony of losing her husband had left her withered, starving and lethargic. Every day, she would eat no more than a few crusts of bread and a mouthful of water. The crones were furious at her weakness and stupidity. “You foolish woman!” one of them had screeched. “How can you expect to care for a growing child when you cannot even take care of yourself?!” Surrma had simply shrugged in defeat, not meeting the withered old tauren’s gaze.

    The angry old woman was proven right. Not even a week later, Surrma had given birth to her child. It was dead before it even left her belly.

    A few weeks later, under the gaze of a fat full moon, Surrma started awake. “I…I know what I have to do…” she whispered. “I…will…I will go and fight. Yes…that’s what I’ll do. Northrend…to where…he is…yes…I will go to my mate, and I will fight, just as he had! I will fight, for him, and for our child! Our beautiful, beautiful child…” She picked up a reeking bundle of rags. “Oh, you’re such a sound sleeper…just like….just like your father…” In the middle of the night, she had gone to where a few young shamans had buried her dead baby just days earlier. The black tauren gathered her husband’s rusted gear, the small handful of gold they owned, her ‘child,’ and vanished into the night.

    The icy wastes of Dragonblight were not a place for a simple housewife. Donning her mate’s old armor, she had boarded the zeppelin from Orgrimmar, and, keep her helmet’s visor down at all times, was able to quietly and wordlessly travel to the frozen land. A few burly soldiers had complained of her filthy appearance and stinking, but oddly precious bundle. Any soldier who tried to wrestle the rotting infant away from her was promptly attacked by Surrma. While not skilled with any weapon, she fought like a mad beast, clawing, biting and tearing at anyone who would dare lay a hand on her baby. She shrieked and howled, desperate to keep her family together. She had spent the rest of the journey detained in the lower decks, quietly sobbing and cooing softly to her long-departed child.

    Her first time on the battlefield was a maddening cacophony of war cries, howling, the flare of magics and the clash of steel. She meandered along the carnage, frightened and confused, clutching the withered remains of her child. Fearing for the ‘safety of her child,’ she could bear no more and fled to a thicket filled with what remained of some long dead trees and shrubs. “There, you’re safe now, To’hae…” she cooed, and brushed a few flies away from the withered infant. The sudden sound of creaking bones, gnashing teeth and grunting snapped her out of her reverie. Sitting on the snow-covered forest floor, she looked up to see a small band of ghouls, gheists and other assorted Scourge, led by a single male troll. He was clad in black, vicious looking armor, and his eyes glowed with an oddly beautiful blue intensity. His skin was clammy and beginning to rot, but his face was calm. He smirked, tilting his massive tusks up. “’Eh now, girly…what’chu doin’ all da way out ‘ere? Chu look….” He studied her poorly fitting armor, her rusted sword, and the fear covering her face. “…out o’ place.” Surrma couldn’t stop her teeth from chattering. The temperature seemed to drop several degrees after the Death Knight arrived.
    “ I-I…..I’m here….” Suddenly, while staring into the glowing blue eyes of the troll, she felt oddly at peace. “ I’m here…for my husband…I’m bringing our baby to go see him.” She turned to her rotting bundle. “ Isn’t that right, my dear? We’re going to go see Daddy…!” Tears began spilling down her face. Her eyes became wild – something the Death Knight noticed immediately. The troll smirked, and bent knelt in front of the weeping mother.
    “ Chu know…I…know a guy. Yeah…if chu’wanna see your husband again, yeah…’e can do dat!” Surrma’s eyes grew wide in disbelief.
    “ …R-really? He’s here? Oh, oh please, lead me t—“ Her pleas were cut short – one of the ghouls had been hungrily eying the tauren and her rotting baby. In a flurry of bones, tattered flesh and fangs, it lunged at her. Surrma, believing the attack to be on her precious baby, immediately flew into a maddening frenzy. “ YOU WILL NOT HARM MY BABY!!” she shrieked, her voice growing hoarse. She grabbed at the ghoul with the strength and savagery of a rabid animal, and, in one smooth motion, tore the ragged creature in half. Saliva frothed her mouth, and her eyes darted to the rest of the group. The Death Knight slowly put his hands up in defense.
    “Ah, whoa d’ere, lady…” The troll paused, looking thoughtful. “Listen, chu can come wit me….ah’ll show ya to your…husband.” The ebony tauren seemed to flip a switch. She smiled gently at the remaining Scourge.
    “ Please…take me to him.” The troll smirked.
    “ Chu betcha, but…one’s t’ing’s first…” He cautiously approached the crazed mother, casually withdrawing a vicious dagger from behind his back. “Dat’s…a real beautiful baby chu got d’ere…um…real….” He searched for a compliment. “…Nice..eyes…” The baby’s eye sockets were long devoid of any optical organ. Surrma beamed.
    “ Thank you! He has my eyes, but so much of his father’s temper—MNnnt….” The Death Knight has smoothly plunged the dagger deep into Surrma’s poorly defended torso. Blood spilled in gushes out of her mouth and nose. Her long lashes fluttered, the life quickly draining out of her. The troll ushered her gently to the cold ground.
    “Sleep now, tauren…” he whispered. “When chu wake up, everyt’ing will be bettah…I promise….”
    Her last free thought was if her baby was dressed appropriately for such brisk weather.

    She awoke a new woman. She felt healthy, powerful, and something else – the constant gaze of someone…it wasn’t bad, but more the steady, yet comforting gaze of a teacher. She had gone through the motions of forging a massive weapon – a ‘runeblade;’ the locals called it – and found she could wield it with relative ease. Funny, considering the first time she picked up a sword was only a few scant weeks ago. Among all of the helpful, yet rotting citizens, and all of the wonderful new gifts, she was ecstatic when she had awoken to find something else: someone had neatly tied up the remains of her long-dead infant and had them in a small leather pack. “My baby!” she had cried, sobbing with tears of joy. “My sweet, precious child…” Surrma had slung the sack around her torso so that the bundle was resting comfortably at her cold breast.
    The next few weeks were a haze. She had remembered…blood. The scent of blood was oddly thrilling; it was like some beautiful drug. She inhaled it in deep breaths, relishing the odd peace it brought her. Then there was fire. A lot of fire. A dragon…she was mounted on its back. Screaming…the eyes of the citizens of the human settlement….she briefly wondered if any of them had any children of their own.
    When the blood haze lifted, she found herself at the footsteps of the Orcish stronghold, Orgrimmar. The mighty Warchief Thrall had shouted over the jeers and slurs of his guards and citizens…something about a ‘pardon.’ Surrma was unsure of what she was being pardoned for; she had done nothing wrong, she was simply surviving. All of those cruel humans – they had wanted to harm her son! It was within every mother’s right to defend herself and her child, right?

    Oh well. All that mattered was that she had her baby.

    …Also, didn’t that troll promise her that she could see her beloved mate again?

    Not requiring food or drink, she walked out of the orc capitol, and began walking. Northrend…he was still in Northrend. Once she found him, then they could be a family again…just like they had always wanted.

   
   
          

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*Whew!* Sorry about that! Awfully long-winded of me. :P

(Please bear in mind, I am NOT a writer. This is just me trying to be linguistically creative. :3)

I look forward to everyone else's tales! :D

~Cadistra the Web-Master Cow

I was young and needed the experience points.

1:31 am
July 5, 2009


Shawndra

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In life, Penitence had been a priestess.  She had served as a healer, as most expected her to, but was secretly fascinated by the power shadow held.  On the excuse that she was visiting the infirm in an outlying community, she would always take a little longer to practice.  It was exhilarating, using shadow to fend off lynx that plagued some of the smaller settlements, and each kill thrilled her.  As she grew stronger in her knowledge of healing, her side trips only served to seduce her away. 

One day, on a particularly long and boring ride to a settlement near Tranquillien, she had to fight her way through some nasty large spiders.  She had no faith in the light, seduced by the power she knew shadow held, and she cast curses, draining their life as it added to her own.  She might even have won.  But the spiders she faced were Scourge, and no sooner did one go down, than two more replaced it.  Alone, off the beaten path, she struggled, vampiric curses adding to her health and sustaining her ability to cast spells, but not long enough.  She fell, he shadow fiends cloudy remains swirling at her feet, exhausted.  A much larger spider was let through, and it wrapped its mandibles around her neck, chittering as it severed it from her body.  The crowd dissipated, searching for more to add to its numbers.  She lay still, the shadowy vapors long gone, replaced by the crimson of her blood.

The spider, Anok'suten, spoke to the geist that he kept for sending messages.  "Tell our king that we have another that may be put to use as one of his army.  I'll keep my minions from feeding on too much of her for now.  If he wants her, he'll have to send transport.  The elves in the next town are putting up quite a fight, and I cannot afford to send any more than you away. Hurry!"  The geist shuffled off, speedily despite the awkward gait it had adopted.

The geist found their King not far from Silvermoon, as it had expected.  The siege had not yet begun, just small attacks on the outlying towns to strengthen their numbers.  It relayed the message, unembellished, and left as quickly as it had arrived.  The King looked to those in his immediate area, and pointed to a group of ghouls with a small wagon. "Fetch the body that lies near the road where Anok'suten has control.  Make sure to bring all of the body.  He has a penchant for beheading his victims."  He waved them along, and set back to planning his siege.

The next day, the group returned, body hanging over the side of the wagon, her head under the arm of the lead ghoul.  They wordlessly handed the head to another who had a table with threads, metal fasteners, needles, hammers, and other strange looking devices.  They then laid the body on the table and shuffled off to the side, to stand until they were given another assignment.

The other went to work, grabbing a large needle and some thick thread.  He sewed the head back onto the neck as securely as it would sit, then wound some brown burlap over the stitching, fastening it closed with a few tacks at the back of her neck.  Satisfied that the head would not come loose, he shuffled to where the King was planning.  "Your body is ready.", was all he said, then he turned and stood with the rest of the Scourge, waiting on his next command.

The King went to the body, followed by some of the newly knighted.  They arranged themselves to either side of the body, and the King bent over her head.  With just a touch, Penitence returned, felt the presence of her King, and bent her head. "I am yours to command.", was all she could manage, her voice light and shivery.  He nodded, and left her in the care of the other knights.  "Make sure she is well armored, and has a blade.  I'm sure a suitable steed will make itself available shortly."

Her days and nights after that first she lived for her King.  She did not doubt that his way was right, never thought to argue that his siege on the small towns near Silvermoon should stop.  The day came where his army was enough, and the plan was set into motion.  The well was to be used to bring back a powerful ally, and then they would lay waste to the elvish capital.  They would start at dusk.

Arthas, with the help of a traitorous elf, gained entrance to the well.  Rituals were performed as the army stood ready.  Penitence watched as the shadow played with the blood and frost, and was happy.  She stood ready, axe in her hands, waiting for a chance to swing it.  That chance came.  A group of elves, feeling something wrong in the ley lines, came to the well, and were followed by more.  Penitence swept through their rainks with her fellow knights, laying waste to them one by one.  The battle was long, but in the end the elves fled. 

Penitence looked around, and had an independent thought.  Looking at the ground, she saw a girl her age, in the robes of the priesthood, her head not quite where it should be.  Even in death, she had an aura of light about her.  Penitence started to wonder at how right this felt.  As they filed out, ready for their next siege, she slowed her mount and fell behind.  She could still hear his orders, but she did not want to follow them.  She turned her mount and headed in the opposite direction.

2:58 am
July 5, 2009


Tharion Greyseer

Louisville, Ky

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((

That's an interesting concept for a death knight. The baby "quirk" is rather unique, I think. Well done!

Below is the origin to my third death knight, Archaies Rimeheart ( ark-EYE-yes RIME-hart ). This snippet is actually part of Lessons from a Blademaster: Path of the Warblade, but told from Archaies's point of view as opposed to Garikhan's.  I'll most likely have the third part of Lessons from a Blademaster: Path of the Warblade up this coming week on Netherbane.com, but I post this version here for you all now. I've linked Part 1 and Part 2 so you can look a little further back in the character's history.

))

Archaies swung his sword as the felguard charged him.  The steel of the blade met the thick flesh of the demon, the resistance against the cut forced the warrior to adjust his balance as the upper half of the demon's torso fell behind him. Archaies Lightheart grinned as the warm tainted blood splattered across his face.

The battle for Mount Hyjal raged viciously.  Horde and Alliance alike defended the night elves' world tree from the invading Burning Legion. The demon lord, Archimonde, was near, and he sought to consume the power of the tree and the Well of Eternity that sat beneath it.

Such a thing could not be allowed.

"HUMAN!" A loud orcish growl rang out from behind Archaies. "TO YOUR LEFT!"

Archaies ducked instinctively and spun to his left in time to dodge a bloodsoaked axe swing. He stabbed his sword forward into the belly of the doomguard, killing the winged beast as he drew the weapon upwards through its torso.

The warning had come from a former orcish blademaster Archaies knew as Garikhan Fireblade. The two had met twice before on the battlefield, as enemies both times. However, both warriors had shown each other honor, and it was this honor that allowed them to meet on THIS battlefield as allies today.  Archaies watched as Garikhan danced between the attacking demons, his thick warblade cutting limbs and heads from the Legion soldiers.

The orc was a skilled warrior, and Archaies was glad that Garikh had spared his life that first day on the field outside of the internment camp. Death had been almost certain, and it was only the respect for the opponent that caused the blademaster to spare the young human.  But both warriors were old now. Both warriors felt the wear of the battles behind them. Both warriors knew the uncertainty of the battles ahead.

Striding next to the blademaster quickly, Archaies Lightheart gaves a quick salute.  "Thank you, Garikhan."

"By our honor, human," responded the orc as he severed the head of another demon. "And for our survival!"

As if to mock the orc's words, a withering shadow fell over the fight. Archaies and Garikhan both spared a glance upward, and both felt their blood run cold at what they saw.  Above them loomed Archimonde, his magically enlarged body lumbering towards Nordrassil.  The giant eredar paid no attention to the soldiers fighting beneath his hooves; they were little more than insects. His gaze was locked into the trunk of the immense world tree before him.

"FALL BACK!" came a shout across the din of battle. Archaies recognized the voice as that of his commander. Apparently, Garikhan heard a similar order from his superiors as well. Both of them began to run away from the massive demon, cutting their way through any Burning Legion demons that stood between them and their retreat.

"I do not intend to die today, Garikhan!" Archaies shouted over to the orc as they ran through the churning mass of violence.  "I intend to see my wif–"

A distant blast of a horn made Archaies stop and turn around. He had heard mention of something like this–had been told that the horn was the final attempt at victory.  He glanced upwards at Archimonde, who had stopped at the base of the tree and had begun channeling. However, as if to answer the call of the horn, hundreds upon hundreds of tiny points of light began to materialize from the forests around them. These forest spirits, these wisps, began to gather around the ancient demon as Archaies watched in fascination.

Archaies Lightheart grinned. The wisps appeared to be distracting the great demon, clustering around him tightly and drawing away the immense creature's energies. Archimonde swatted at the annoyances, the expression on his face turning from irritation to fear as his skin began to break apart.

Victory! Archaies felt a rush of excitement. He had not noticed how far he had fallen behind the retreating group. He had not noticed the incoming mass of demons charging towards the world tree's roots.  He did not notice the felguard that struck him until after the demon's wicked pike was protruduing from his chest.

Archaies fell to his knees after the demon ripped the spear back out.  Blood poured from the open wound profusely, and his vision began to fade.  I do not intend to die today… not … today…

The darkness closed around the man known as Archaies Lightheart swiftly.

* * *

The flames still smoldered across the battlefield as the unseen creature glided silently across the forest of death. The allies of the dead had not returned to reclaim the bodies of the fallen yet, which meant they were fair game to the scavengers of the Scourge.

The nameless lich gifted the dead warriors–orc, tauren, human, troll, and even night elf–with the Lich King's power of undeath. Most creatures, ripped apart from the explosion that sundered the world tree, were fit for little more than the unlife of being a ghoul. Some, however, could be resurrected as something more. Some were fit to serve the master in a greater capacity…

* * *

Archaies gasped, but no air filled his lungs. His throat croaked instead, taking in what felt like cold air into his dry mouth. It was very cold here; unnaturally so.

Your will is mine now, came a haunting voice from the depths of his mind. Archaies did not recognize the ethereal sound. Surprisingly, he felt no fear towards the speaker. You will serve me in death as you served others in life.

Instinctively his hand went to his chest. He felt crude stitches holding together a half-healed wound. A chilled fluid seeped from the ragged cut, as if his body were still attempting to mend itself.  Archaies knew better, however. He had seen what had become of his homeland of Lordaeron before the Third War began. He knew what he had become.

I rename you, Archaies, spoke the voice in his head. I rename you Rimeheart, servant of the Lich King.

"Rimeheart," he spoke aloud as he saw his surroundings for the first time. The ancient stone walls surrounding him were alien in their carvings and markings. But he knew it was home now. He was home now.

Archaies Rimeheart was home.

"I seek not followers, only equals."

-Shan'do Tharion Greyseer
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8:04 am
July 5, 2009


Axium

Member

posts 43

(( I actually thought this one out for my DK.))

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Axel

The hungering cold… That is all I can remember. Some tell me I was a great hero. Others called me a heretic. Even others spit in my face as I stood before Thrall holding the letter that was given to me. My life before this has been forgotten.

I do not remember what it was like to have a pulse. All I know is that from the very first time I could stand I was filled with this power. This hunger, and that voice. I stood behind him then. The master looked me over. We were to be his greatest knights. There were many others like me standing in front of him as we had our first look at the red sky. That was the first, of many, bloody massacres of the living. I stood there with humans, dwarves, tauren, gnomes, trolls and yes, even our otherwordly visitors from drenor, the orcs and the draenei. United we stood behind one banner… Behind one man… and all of us had one purpose.

In truth maybe then he could have been the leader of the world, we would never know. But we fought brilliantly. Blow for blow the humans of the Scarlet Crusade fought against us but we never faulterd. We never failed. Each death strengthened our own numbers as he pushed forward. Glorious was the battle. Consuming was the voices in our head to push forward and destroy yet in the whole of the slaughter I felt nothing. My blade rendered flesh and bone at the battle of Light's Hope. The master's war was our own war. Little did we know, we were marching toward our doom.

The Horde Warchief looked me over with disgust as he pulled the letter from my cold undead fingers. I thought it would best befit me to kneel to this orc since that seemed to be the custom. Behind me the few drabble of other Ebon Knights knelt with me as I presented the letter. No words were said. As we walked through the streets of what I assumed to be Orgrimmar, we were met with jeers and blows. Pitiful meatbags. But we were forced to stay our blade. The Warchief looked at us and nodded. We were now warriors once more in service to the Horde. Yet even then all we were doing is killing and still… I felt nothing.

Is this what freedom is? Now here I stand. At the gates of Northrend. Lady Sylvanas looked at me and smiled. Sylvanas, the last link I have to my former life. I fight now under her banner. We, the lost defenders of Quel'Thelas. The fallen. The Forsaken. We stand at the gates themselves to finally take our vengence. The charge has begun. I do not know where we go from here. All I know is now, that this, The Forsaken's last stand against the Lich King. Our creator who we have come to destroy. The battle will be glorious. Maybe then, I can finally rest. I turn my horse to the last regiment to serve under Lady Sylvanas the Protector of Quel'Thelas and give them the signal. It was time to charge. Once we fought together to defend. Now it's our turn to attack.

((Some of it might not make sense. I actually have 2 DKs ^_^ Tell me what you think of it. I'll post my 2nd DK later. SHE has a very sad storyline being developed and hopefully will be brought into Webcomic form sometime soon by my significant other who plays her.))

10:48 am
July 5, 2009


Cadistra

Admin

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Great stories, all three of you! :D

I was young and needed the experience points.

2:13 pm
July 5, 2009


Axium

Member

posts 43

Post edited 9:16 pm – July 5, 2009 by Axium


(( A story me and my significant other have been working on together. She is drawing comics on it and hopefully we'll be able to bring it about here soon. Here is just a small tidbit of what the story will be like. ))

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Koti stood beside her husband as the Caravan got closer to the eastern plaguelands. Their children, Rex and their daughter, were inside their wagon as they traveled. Their entourage consisted of a few paladins and others trying to make the journey to silvermoon with much needed supplies for the rebuilding.

Dokomo sniffed the air. The stench of death surrounded him and he felt sick to his stomach. Koti stood close buy, weary from the ride. Something wasn't right. It was silent. Much to silent.

Sensing a trap Dokomo looked to the paladins and they nodded back at them. They pulled their shields and swords out. Suddenly it happened. The ground started to rumble.

“Get back!” Dokomo started to issue the order for the caravan to put the children in the Wagons and put the wagons in the center. The paladins put a semi circle around them and waited. The tremors grew louder then stopped. From the distance a huge form arose over the horizon followed by another and then even another.

Koti quickly jumped into the Wagon and put Rex and her daughter into an empty chest. He kissed the forhead of her son Rex and gently looked down at the sleeping form of their youngest daughter. She instructed that under no circumstance should Rex open the lid of the Chest. She jumpped out and pulled her daggers out to join her husband Dokomo.

The battle was fierce. The paladins did their best to hold back the Undead as they swarmed closer. Dokomo stood in the center with other shamans and casted their lightning deep into the Undead but the swarms quickly overpowered them. An axe hit Dokomo in the back and he fell. A Death Knight quickly moved in for the kill. Dokomo looked up in time to see Koti being beared down blow for blow with another Death Knight weilding and Axe. Suddenly the axe hit, severing her collerbone down into her throat. The Death Knight kicked her away and a blood curdling scream was heard from Dokomo as he reached out to her.

“NOOOOO!” Dokomo, on his hands, reached out and tried to crawl to Koti. Her head rolled to the side as she tried to reach for her Orc husband. Their fingers almost touched when the axe came down severing Dokomo's head from his body. Koti's eyes lost their life as the rest of the undead started to ravage all who were left.

During this time a pair of eyes watched as both his father and his mother fell in battle. Rex looked on in horror and screamed. A scourge goul jumped up on the chest and started to jump up and down to try and open it. His sister crying along with him as he tried to duck lower into the chest. This child, not much older then 6 or 7, tried desperately to get away.

The top of the chest was ripped open and down stared the most horrible face of a goul dripping spit and other fluids out of it's gapping maw. He screamed and was about to reach into the crate. Suddenly the creature fell backwards horribly in pain and fell away. Too scared to look up over the chest Rex curled up arround his Sister as the horn of the Argent Dawn was heard. They had seen the signal flair but the reinforcements from Lights Hope was just too late. They drove back the scourge but not without them taking the bodies away.

Amoung the Paladins was a Blood Knight regiment. They fought bravely. As the scourge retreated they surveyed the damage. Upon comming over Dokomo's severed head and body, Axium, Brother of Koti, fell to his knees at the sight. They were comming up to visit him and to allow the children to meet their grandmother. He fell to his knees in front of Dokomo and put a hand to his chest as he cried over Dokomo's body. The Orc was like a brother to him. Not far out, within arms reach of Dokomo's outstreached hands, laid Koti's broken blades. Her body was never recovered from the battlefield.

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((That's all you get. Wait for the actual Comic which my Significant other should be getting up soon enough. ^_^ if you haven't guessed, Koti is a Blood Elf Rogue who is changed into a Death Knight. Dokomo is a Orc Shaman, and Axium [ME!] is a Blood Elf Pally.))

5:51 pm
July 5, 2009


snorklewacker

New Member

posts 2

[[Just an opener, filling in backstory for my human DK, Eschenbach, on Maelstrom-US. Need to sit down and write the actual backstory next. :) Curious to hear feedback!]]

Your Majesty,

Per your directive regarding the absorption of the Scourge Knights into our ranks, I have researched the origins of the knight calling himself Eschenbach. While tracing the origins of any of these Scourge knights can be difficult, sufficient clues exist from his name and from brief conversations with him regarding the dispositions of a package found in the Plaguelands (see attached memo re:origins of "Ol' Emma") for me to identify this individual with a reasonable degree of confidence.

The knight Eschenbach was born Artan von Eschenbach, the younger son of a minor noble family displaced by the Third War from their ancestral lands within the kingdom of Lordaeron. Following their displacement, the family was taken into your court as temporary ambassadors of that kingdom (cf. Royal Memo VW-1922-Q, "Regarding the disposition of certain noble families of the Kingdom of Lordaeron") and assigned management duties within the city of Ironforge, per our personnel exchange agreements with the dwarves (q.v.). Raised largely at Ironforge, Artan learned warcraft as a human among dwarven comrades, and upon reaching his majority, was signed to the service of the Light as a Paladin, an event celebrated by family and friends as a high honor, as well as the successful disposition of a younger son.

Artan was listed within the combat rolls of the Army of the Light as squire, then as a full knighted Paladin, for several years, his education noted for skills in combat (his instructors indicated he tended to favor the axe over the more-common sword or mace choices) and herbal craft. Per standard, his graduation from squirehood with honors granted him status as a Knight of the Silver Hand, recorded in the logbooks of that order upon his entry.

From that point forward, his history becomes less certain: the records of the Silver Hand are still in considerable disarray following the betrayal of Arthas and the near-destruction of the order; too, much of the combat work of the order remains classified to me per Royal Memo VW-1704-S, an issue about which I have raised complaints previously (viz. "Letters to King Varian Wrynne," vol. 12, chapter 4 for a particularly well-worded example). What records I do have access to indicate that his superiors assigned him to combat duty within the ruined kingdom of Lordaeron (now referred to as the Plaguelands), responsible for assisting with the elimination of the Scourge from that area. It further appears that young Artan was briefly betrothed to a young noblewoman, Nimuette, of a noble family of the Stormwind courts, a betrothal that appears to have raised the ire of several suitors, among them the Earl di Rejjan, who sought her as his own bride.

Following the announcement of the betrothal, little more is heard of young Artan for some months, until his name appears on the list of the dead from a minor skirmish near the tomb of Uther Lightbringer in the Western Plaguelands. The commander in charge of that battle, the aforementioned Earl di Rejjan, was chastised for not recovering Artan's body following the combat (he filed a defense indicating the bodies were no longer present once the area was secured), but little more became of the matter. The young man's family sword and badges of service were interred in lieu of a body in the family's temporary mausoleum, and his fiancee appears to have subsumed herself in mourning rather than accept the attentions of another suitor.

Regarding the remainder of the family, there is little more to tell, and none of it cheerful. Artan's mother, the Lady Eschenbach, died in childbirth some years ago, birthing his younger sister, who, it would appear, is the sole remaining heir to whatever remains of their estate. The father has been ailing for some time, and the older brother died last year in an abortive duel with the Earl di Rejjan, claiming grievous offense for the death of Artan. Once my Lord Eschenbach passes, we will likely have a difficult matter: the inheritance of whatever family estate remains should devolve upon the daughter, Leana, but the sudden reappearance of her brother in some…undetermined state of existence presents complications that may require legal sorting out.

There the matter stands, as near as I can determine. I shall put my resources into further research of the other Scourge Knights unless I hear from you that this matter requires further insight.

Your humble servant,

H. Bathrilor
by Order and Grace of His Majesty Varian Wrynne,
Royal Factor to the Kingdom Stormwind

6:33 am
July 9, 2009


Bebuzzu

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I hope to get a basis on Lichborne started, and to set his foundation. Besides the 7 Questions he has not been seen by the light of day. Besides the obvious fact he's a death knight he's one of the few that hasn't died (I'm sure someone out there is a LIVING death knight though) and also one of the few that doesn't really like the Ebon Blade that much. (Doesn't like should be taken lightly, we're not talking complete hatred. Just a disliking that is noticable.) So then anywho, Cadistra seems to like the stories so I give you Lichbornes!

[Warning: Wall of Text Incoming!]

A Fate Worse than Death

The oldest memory I recall is waking up in the halls of Acherus, which they told me would be my new 'home'. I of course knew what must've been going on, it was rather more or less the mere shock of it actually happening that put me in a confused state. None the less, they guided me on my way to becoming a champion of the Lich King. As for my name? Simple. Most Death Knights have a hard time concepting the first few moves they learn let alone master, I had developed quickly enough that within my first training sessions I grew a quick comprehension of the magics they gave me. They named me after a technique I used the first moments of training: “Lichborne”.

After days of training they sent me on my first missions to the forces below, commanding me to slaughter the innocent and behead those that would try and stop me. And so I did, without question or falter. I maimed and killed people as they begged for their lives. Their screams piercing the dead air as I pierced my blade into each and every one of their fragile bodies. I felt nothing at this, no remorse or guilt. The Lich King had his hold on me, and he knew just how to keep it. My emotions, locked permenently within my mind, made me a wonderful puppet to his disposal.

All Death Knights know the feeling though, the feeling he watches over your every movement. However, most of them did it on their own will or under complete control rather. I was merely a puppet, without slaughter I merely awaited orders before resting for the next day. Yes, resting. Through all of this, to the much distaste of my 'colleagues', I still kept a living shell. My heart still beating, my blood still pumping. To them, though, it was a sign of weakness. It was only through my abilities to kill hundreds a time that they we're silenced.

In such a state, I did not think of or otherwise mourn or regret any of my actions. Only the Lich Kings voice being my guidance. Imagine it this way, many think good and evil choices like a Angel and Devil sitting on your shoulder telling you what you should do. Imagine now, that the Angel is long since gone, your mind drained of any thoughts or ideas, and only the Devil left on your shoulder. This is what made me such a perfect soldier, a perfect killer. Even as a woman pleaded to me to stop, telling me that she knew me and that I was stronger than this, I merely killed her and shrugged her death off as though it we're nothing at all. NOTHING AT ALL…

Hrmph… and some of the Cultists of the Damned believe undeath better than death. Torture, Hell, thats my only descriptions of it. Like a dream you couldn't control, couldn't wake yourself from and stop it all. A dream that you knew was real, and a dream you would later see the results of. The fruits of your bloodshed. The Scourge. For each slain came a ghoul, a skeletal warrior, another 'brother'. A unending fuel for the Lich King.

Soon enough though I accended his ranks, with great ease. Though in my emotionless state, I was best on the field rather at command, I still found way into the few forces the Lich King sent to take the last stand against him. The only hope this god forsaken land had. Light's Hope Chapel.

The Lower End of the Bargain

The assault on Light's Hope Chapel began as did any assault on a major facility or important landmark we had taken before. Even Mograine came to the battle field to lead us to battle. With a bloodstirring speech, he rose the very dead that had fallen to the chapel before us and rode forward headon into the main forces of the Light. I merely followed, as always.

This battle started out as did many, a good but inevidable fight where our enemy merely fought against unsurmountable odds. Many died, others fell unconcious on the very battlefront. In the midst of our battle came Tirion, on a brown steed, undetected by most all of our forces. From then he dismounted near the steps of the Chapel and announced his arrival, from which something powerful arose. Light seeped through the blighted ground as the earth shook with a great force. Most of us, even Mograine, we're having difficulty keeping our ground as Tirion dragged Mograine to the front of the chapel.

From there, the events you know as the Fight of Light's Hope Chapel occured. To you, the battle was one of great glory. Death Knights, once heroes of the Alliance and Horde, we're now free from the Lich King's grasp! Now with knowledge of the weapons that the Lich King himself would use against us. The creation of the great Argent Crusade! To most of you, this was a time of great joy and victory.

It was not.

On that day, the grip of the Lich King freed me. My shackles finally released, but also my will. On that day, like a tidal wave of complete desomation, every scream every single waking moment of dispair that my victims had was finally heard. On that day, I rode out to a barren stretch of plagueland and mourned. Mourned the loss of the innocent to my hands. Mourned the orphans and widows I left. Mourned, knowing that they would never have revenge. Revenge to kill the monster that was now their ally.

The Ebon Blade now split from the Lich King had to have leverage to garner a unification with the powerful races of the Horde and Alliance. And they knew just where to get it. Many stayed behind to man Acherus or otherwise travel with the Argent Crusade in preperations for the war to Northrend, me and few others we're sent to Orgrimmar, or in my case Stormwind, to convince the leaders to allow us passage into their Factions. This would in the basics have me and those whom went to Orgrimmar inevidably find ourselves on opposite ends of the battlefield, but it was necessary in order to establish an agreement with the Factions for the Ebon Blade.

I of course had to ask, how would I be of use to them? Why would the Alliance care for getting me as another soldier, and a previous murderer at that. The only response I was given was that 'my past is good enough'. I did not fully understand this until I noticed my arrival to Stormwind was strange, stranger than my colleagues I assure you. When I entered Stormwinds gates, a guard came up and brought me to king Varian. The guard apparently knew me and wished to assist me.

And so that is my story. From that on I merely served the Alliance until I was Knighted. But that is a whole other story. I still do not remember my past, the only proof that I ever existed being many whom claim to have seen me once or twice. Some having served with me. The only information I have gathered is that I served Stormwind before my capture.

And so I serve, ready for action. My undying resolve making me a unstoppable force on the battlefield. For I am the bringer of death, not a merchant, not a blacksmith. A killer, a soldier of darkness.

I am Lichborne.

Insanity has brought you here to me, I shall be your… undoing.

6:30 pm
July 9, 2009


Kissless

Vancouver, Canada

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Post edited 3:26 am – July 10, 2009 by Kissless


Thought I'd give it a shot. ^_^

This is a little long, but after bebuzzu's post I feel better about it. I'm afraid I don't have any cool images for it, though!

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“My Lord.” Bowed the Baron Mograine. The Lich King not much as turned as tilted his helmet slightly in his direction. It was the signal to continue.

“One of the prisoners in the torture holds seems to be of interest, my Lord.”

The King was silent, so Mograine took it as sign to continue,

“A tactician of Silvermoon.”

Now the Lich King's attention was on him, and he felt the shiver down his spine as ice-cold eyes settled on him. What went on behind that steady glow, he couldn't begin to imagine.

“Quel'Thalas must fall.” Said Arthas, his voice the hymn of death itself, “You think this one tactician will make a difference in the face of the Scourge?”

“He claims he can tell you how to get to the Sunwell and past the three gates of Quel’Thalas with minimal losses.”

“What delays you from getting this information, then?” He demanded, making his Baron cringe before answering,

“He's been… impudent.” Before his King could command him to tear the man's heart out were he not to concede, Mograine continued, “He claims he will reveal it all to you in person, My Lord.”

“You captured him?” The King asked.

“No, My Lord. He came here of his own volition.”

“To betray his people? Interesting.”

The Lich King turned on his heels and started his march to the torture chambers.

The screams of the victims, a nigh constant backdrop to Acherus in those days, were howling their terrible song as the Lich King’s plated boots gave percussion down the stairs.

“Such a morbid song.” Said the tactician, hanging limp in his chains. The frail body of a high elf was no match for the expert tortures of the Lich’s men. Still, when he looked up Arthas saw a shard of determination in the blue eyes. Mograine, at his side, noted with some interest that the glow was quiet different. “An honor to meet you, oh Betrayer.”

“Tell me, insect, why should I not crush your life right now?”

With a weak tilt of his head, the tactician gave out a bark of laughter,

“Well, for one, your lackies are enjoying their work on me. For another, I can get you into the city.”

“And why, prey thee tell, would I believe you to betray your own people?”

Here the man’s face hardened, he lifted his chin and stared the Lich King square in the face. Mograine noted that the man was terrified, but held on nonetheless. Why did this remind him of something? Why did it stir something in his cold innards?

“Quel’Thalas will fall, whether I help you or no, King of Death.” His face showed resignation and determination. What was his intent? “Sylvanas cannot hold off the Scourge alone, and our ‘allies’ have turned from us.” He shook his head, finally looking away, “My people  mocked me when I warned them, called me names and expelled me from the war council.” He took in a breath and exhaled it slowly, “No, Quel’Thalas will fall. There is no hope.”

“And you wish to turn to the Lich King’s favor?” Asked the Baron, somewhat surprised. The idea of an army of Death Knights had occurred to himself and the King, but volunteers so far have been… scarce. Especially from the yet-resistant High Elf kingdom.

“No, I care not what happens to me.” Said the prisoner, looking weary again, the strength draining from his eyes. “I will help you, but I want something in return.”

Arthas had heard these pleas before.

“Immortality, power and money?” The Baron rolled his eyes.

“What need do I have with those?” The Elf wearily asked, then answered the unasked question, “My family. My family must not be harmed!” When they silently regarded his request he elaborated, “The city will fall, my people will die. I care not anymore. I tried to save them, to warn them.” He drew a ragged breath, “But they laughed me out. Called me names. I care not for them! My family! My wife, my two sons and three daughters, they must be safe.”

The self-proclaimed King of Lordaeron approached the prisoner, picked up his chin with two massive, armored fingers.

“You are a good tactician? You will get me past Sylvanas and into your lands?”

“I am the very best tactician in Quel’Thalas, save Sylvanas herself.” He tried to keep himself from shaking. Whether from the Lich King’s icy grip or from fear, the Baron could not tell.

Letting him go and turning away, the King turned to Mograine again. Immediately the man straightened in his spot.

“See to it that he tells you all that we need to know. Then kill him before the attack begins. I want him knighted and provided with a mount before the month’s end.” He started out of the torture chamber.

“And my family? What of my family?” The elf yelled out after him, frantic and desperate.

“They shall be spared.” Said the Lich King and left.

He arrived in the ruins of Silvermoon well after the attack was done. He was clad and in the black and blues of Arthas’ most feared Knights and dubbed one of his master tacticians. The position that had eluded him so long in life finally granted to him in death.

His light frame could have never bourn the plate-mail that covered his body now. Death and ice flowed in his veins now, giving a strength he never had. He cared nothing for it. His mind was still his sharpest weapon, despite the runeblade at his side. His boots trampled half-dead flowers and debree as he wove his way through streets once filled with banners and gardens and life. Streets that were a way home, to his family, to his life.

He found the door to their residence smashed open. Fingers as cold as death prodded the door aside, and he entered.

When he found his wife, she was long dead. A few dead ghouls scattered the hallway leading to the children’s bedrooms. Silently and without expression, he followed the trail.

Nothing left. Destroyed room in a mess, blood spatters on the walls and floors. His wife’s remains would prove that the ghouls to came through here were hungry. He foot nudged a stuffed troll-doll that used to belong to his youngest.

He left.

His people were dead. He cared not.

He family was dead. A part of him knew it all along. It was over. He didn’t care anymore. Nothing mattered. Let the world fall into the same ruin he saw here. Let the pain he felt wash the world away. The dead cannot be tormented so.

Let him discard a name that meant life to him and pick up the one they gave him when they mocked him. When they said Quel’Thalas would never fall, when they forbade him to remove his family from therein as to not cause ‘panic in the populace’. They said he was a doomsayer, and gave him a monicker to match. One that even in life he had his family adopt in defiance to the council’s arrogance.

Let those who would remind him of life fear the name ‘Stormkrow’.

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Long, I know!

And yes, it’s misspelled because the name ‘Stormcrow’ was already taken on the server I play on. ^_^;

1,000,000 points if you can guess who this guy is! Wink

Look, you said troll skulls. You didn't say that had to be EVIL troll skulls! Those trolls in the newbie area won't even notice them missing.

8:44 pm
July 9, 2009


snorklewacker

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A brief second chapter for this; started adding content to the story onto a blog since I've gotten so inspired by the project!

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It was the forest. It was always the forest. Green with life, even under the crushing blanket of plague spread by Scourge soldiers from one end of Lordaeron to the other. Much as you try to crush it out, it spreads under your fingers, splashes away, and re-forms as you pull back your hand, alive and well and green with hope.

He stood at the railing, staring down at the forest. For years afterward, it would be the first really clear memory he had. The forest floated below him almost impossibly far below, the green of the woods punctuated by the abrupt upjutting of mountainous hills. He squinted in the bright sunshine, staring down at the green blanket below, watching the splashes of blue and red flutter back and forth from tree to tree as if in bald defiance of the land he knew to be riddled with plague. He didn't know how he knew that, but he knew it.

It occurred to him that he couldn't remember his name. Or whether he had one.

It then occurred to him that this might be significant, after a fashion, although he couldn't have explained why. He looked down at himself.

The body of a young man, somewhere between twenty and forty. No wrinkles on the hands, some scars here and there, although none so impolite as to be caught in the process of healing, just faint whitish lines. He looked at the forest again and tried a little harder to remember a name. Nothing occurred to him.

Nor did anything occur to him when he tried to imagine what he'd had for breakfast that morning. Or what time it was. Or where he was. And yet, oddly, none of this seemed especially important to him, this lack of remembering, just a vague disturbance, a sudden passing urge that now seemed rather silly. He heard a noise behind him and turned away from the railing, noticing now as if he'd not before that he was wearing a homespun robe, belted at the waist, with a cowl nudging the back of his neck, and little more than a loincloth underneath. As he turned, the robe scratched against a newly-discovered scar high on his side, pink and still healing, as if he'd gotten it recently, though the wound should have been fatal and he had no recollection of receiving it at all.

The man in front of him, by contrast, was garbed in a full suit of armor topped by a large, horned helmet, underneath which the shadows of a face and two brightly glowing blue eyes could be spotted. He looked at the eyes directly. A buzz settled across his mind like a rosined bow across the back of a saw, and the entire world faded except for that blue glow.

GOOD, said his mind. THIS ONE WILL DO. TIRION HAS MUCH TO PAY FOR. TRAIN THIS ONE. I WILL REMAKE HIM.

The glow brightened. He remembered nothing more.

9:23 pm
July 9, 2009


Bebuzzu

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Post edited 4:23 am – July 10, 2009 by Bebuzzu


This is a little long, but after bebuzzu's post I feel better about it. I'm afraid I don't have any cool images for it, though!

Sorry, but as the Mythbusters always say.

“If it's worth doing, it's worth OVERdoing.” Then again I only abide by that when convenient to me, of course, being the lazy bum I am. Good storys everyone!

Insanity has brought you here to me, I shall be your… undoing.

9:57 pm
July 9, 2009


krizzlybear

Canada, eh?

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Post edited 4:59 am – July 10, 2009 by krizzlybear


Life at the Mill was boring for the heiress of the Harrowshire Lumbering Company.  Lady Danilla sat on the porch of a statley home overlooking the company's latest project, decimating a small portion of Lordaeron.  Well outside the jurisdiction of the forest-friendly high elves of Silvermoon and Quel'thalas, she was quietly hesitant about the falling reputation of her father's lumber empire.  She cared not for the man who took part in conceiving her, and despite forceful requests for her to take over the company when he passed on, her soft spot for the environment always spurred tension between her and the rest of the high-society family.

Her only support was from her personal servant, Mr. Harris, who had appeared in front of her in the nick of time before her thoughts trailed off towards something snark about her parents.

“Miss Harrowshire, would you like your tea today?”

“…”

As usual, she remained mute.  For an elegant beauty of her age, the long black flowing hair and exotic pale skin beamed out with personality, yet she never spoke much to anyone, even her butler.  Regardless, he would always seem to understand her thoughts, as if it were magic.

“…Well, yes, Miss Harrowshire.  I suppose you can have it later.  But on the other hand, there is a small matter that you need to attend to.”

“…”

Her incredulous look belied the severity of the situation, but she knew she had no choice.  Standing up poshly, she trailed behind Mr. Harris as he walked her to the front of the house.

Pointing at a small sack of grain, the graying servant loooked back at his master, puzzled.

“A company of men passed by the house dropping off a shipment of grain for the workers.  Trouble is, your fa- I mean, there was no order of grain made in the first place.”

“…”

Lady Danilla turned away, Mr. Harris trailing her loyally, grain sack cradled in his arms.

That night, Mr. Harris baked a loaf of bread to make a sandwich for Danilla as a midnight snack.  Accepting the meal heartily, the young miss cordially consumed the meal in the most polite manner possible.

“Young miss, despite what you may think, you would make a savvy businesswoman if you opened up to the idea of taking over your father's company.”

Despite the taboo phrases that she heard him utter, somehow the genuine tone of his speech reached out to her.  As she opened her mouth to respond to him in kind, Lady Danilla clutched at her chest and collapsed to the floor.

“Oh dear!  Are you okay miss?  Someone help!”

Lady Danilla's view faded into a sea of red…

…She woke up in an unfamiliar place.  It was a citadel of sorts, teeming with the stench of undeath, far removed from the comforts and luxuries of her family villas.  Where was she?  What was she doing?  Her usual attire of silken sundresses had been replaced by bloodied plate armor.

She had re-awakened as a Death Knight of the Lich King's legion of Scourge minions.

Ahh, so you have become self-aware, child.  Good.  Know that in life, you were an object of affection, attended to by countless servants.  But now you are the servant, and you serve me, the Lich King.

“…”

Even in death, she found little words to express herself with.

Your first task then, is to raise a ghoul from the death-defiled fields of your precious Lordaeron.  What your precious lumber mill has started with its destruction of the forests, I have finished.  Go forth and show me your will!

Instantly, she found herself in the middle of a browned field, stained with the ichor and unfathomably dead soil of the plaguelands, a shell of its former self.  Yet Lady Danilla, with her newfound abilities, seemed to grab command of them as if they had always been with her.

Stepping over a crumbled rock, Danilla felt a slight sensation emanating from the ground underneath her.  A corpse, perhaps, but it was her to find out.  Raising a hand out in front of her, she held the runsword in the other hand and uttered words that were foreign to her, despite mouthing the syllables perfectly.  The runes on her blade glowed eerily, and the soil rustled with sudden energy.

A hand protruded from the ground, then an arm, and then the rest of the torso emerged as if from nowhere.  A body, stripped of life, a marionette of sorts, stood awkwardly as if it were to collapse under its own weight.  The face was mangled and decomposed, much like the rest of the body, to the point of expresionlessness. Yet somehow, its voice was as articulate as ever.

“…Lady Danilla?”  It asked.

“…”

Her words began to force out of her mouth, desperate to escape and become audible to the form in front of her.

“…Mr. Harris?”

Uncharacteristic of a brainless ghoul, it was almost as if Mr. Harris never died, but simply took on the maccabre form of the one she knew so well in life.

“My word!  It would seem as if I had such a terrible headache!  Come along, miss.  There's plenty of work to do before the next sunset.  We can't have you in that bloody mess of armor now, can't we?”

“…”

Lady Danilla noddled.  Whether the corpse had talked of its own volition, or if it was the magic of the runes that glowed in her sword, it mattered not to her.  She felt comfortable again, and without the pressures of life to worry about, the curse of undeath didn't seem too bad at all.

“Excellent, Miss Harrowshire!  Let us make our way back to Acherus, and perhaps I can fix you a nice sandwich.”

“…”

The ghoul limped off, heading back to Acherus.  Lady Danilla smilled, as she trailed behind her companion as they walked into the sunset, the Ebon Hold looming over them with a harrowed sillouette.

10:54 am
July 16, 2009


Neuropox

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Golem Clutchshift was his name. He remembered his former days only vaguely now, like a passing dream or a old legend. What he did remember was disjointed, and occasionally jumbled, but after some time free of the lich kings grasp, he was able to piece it together. His first memory was of his laboratory in Gnomeregan, working on the new defense system the mecha-engineer had requested, the alarm bot. He worked for days planning, testing, building, adjusting. Long hours with little communication with anyone was the mode of operation here. When he finished he presented it to the Mecha-engineer. Only then did he find out why the urgency of the request was there. Lordaeron had fallen. The leaders of Ironforge and Gnomergan feared that Arthas may be coming for them next and were preparing defences for the onslaught of the undead that was sure to come.

A year passed, and the assault never materialized. But one day while tinkering on a new invention, Golem was summoned to Ironforge. While the new trogg menace was beginning to be a problem, the newly formed Argent Dawn were looking for some new ways to keep an eye on the undead in that area. They had requested Golem specifically because of his expertise with alarm and warning systems. The plan was simple, ride gryphon's to chillwind camp then continue mounted to Lights Hope Chapel. Early the next morning Golem, 2 dwarven hunters, a gnome priestess, and a human paladin set off for chillwind camp. Arriving mid-day, they felt that they would be able to make it to lights hope chapel before sundown.  As they rode past andorhol, they heard a muffled scream from a house on the outskirts of town. Unsure of the source, the party decided to move closer and see if they could discern where it came from.

After that he could only remember bit's and pieces of what had happened. …One of the hunters being swallowed up by the ground… The priest being slashed in half by a ghoul as she tried to cast a spell to attack the multitude that surrounded them… golem on the ground, blood in his mouth, barly able to see the paladin continue to fight as the undead kept coming…. Then he remembered the words in his head "Arise champion of the Scourge." After that the service of the lich king began. Renamed neuropox for the way his intelligence infected others, he soon began his march towards destiny, not caring, not living, only serving him….

That was some time ago. Now he was free. The highlord now was fighting arthas in icecrown. And as for Neuropox, he  had a passing wish for the life that was. He was now a new person, and would make sure the lich king paid for his crimes. Looking up into the spires of Dalaran, he vowed that he would keep remembering his past, for even though he was made anew, it was his past, and the past is one thing that he had saw must never be forgotten. Getting off the bench, he picked up his sword Necropaxx, and walked towards the flightmaster, and icecrown.

Once more unto the breach, Dear friends

7:55 pm
July 23, 2009


Luisette

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Post edited 3:10 am – July 24, 2009 by Luisette


As later recounted to Luisette Dawnrise by her sister, Närcyssa Deathsong.

 

I remember the cold. 

I remember vividly and with such painstaking agony how it turned my blood to ice, and how it slowed my heart and numbed my mind. Only by sheer will and determination to prove my worth – nay, my soul – did I manage to keep my heart beating and my lungs breathing. Death beckoned me with his sweet caresses and honeyed whispers, and oh, were he a lover I would have succumbed to his charms. 

But he was not my master. 

I could feel my blood begin to crystallize within my veins, and my head snapped back with a sudden jolt of agony. My screams were silent – I could not speak even if I wished – and my eyes rolled backwards until I could not see. My body writhed on the floor, contorting into impossible positions. It was not long before pain overtook my will and I blacked out. 

…my god, what have I done…

 

I lay against the fountain in the middle of Andorhal, beaten and bloody and, ultimately, surrounded. Ghouls were madly grinning and snapping at my feet, spit dripping from their jowls as they made guttural squeals like swine and clawed out towards me, wishing to feast. Skeletal warriors stood amongst them, cackling, taunting me. One reached out its sword and lifted my chin with the tip, forcing me to look into its hollow eyes, but I jerked my head away and spat in disgust. The blade must have nicked my skin, for a small ghoul close to my shoulder started to whine and drool fervently. But he did not move. 

I heard a sudden, chill voice. “Quite… an intriguing turn of events.” I raised my gaze to meet its owner’s, and I shivered involuntarily. “Indeed,” it continued, “we have had fresh meals sent to us directly from the Argent fools, but none so very… alone.”

Araj stopped in front of me and peered down, his bony visage split in half by a mocking smile. “Either you’re very headstrong—or very stupid. Tell me, child, do you fear death?” 

I gave him a fierce glare. “Least of all death.” 

He laughed at this, and the ghouls behind him cackled madly, if only because he had done so himself. “Oh? Pray tell, paladin, what it is that you fear.” 

I gave him the only answer I could. I replied, “Weakness.” 

A smile, and a wave of an arm. 

“Good.”

11:49 pm
August 30, 2009


JusticeJuice

Member

posts 20

I finally finished this.  I appologise for the lenght and I even cut the ending short. 

He had been left alone after the raid on the town.  It made him uncomfortable to be alone.  He  had been ordered to kill the prisoners that were unworthy to join the Lich king's forces.  Such trust had been placed with him, he did not want to fail.  There had been rumors of knights failing the Lich King before and how they suffered for it.

He opened the door to the barracks where they had chained the prisoners.  He unsheathed his sword and looked in the eyes of the first prisoner.  The spark was not there, it was not worthy of joining.  He raised his arm to strike when he heard the sound.  It was an odd sound and something about it made him uneasy.  He halted his swing and  looked for the source.  A young troll girl was sitting in the corner slowly rocking back and forth.

Her long black hair didn't hide the scars on her face.  Her green eyes were vacant lacking the spark  needed to become one of the Lich King's minions.  The sound came from her mouth, it kept time with the jingle of the chains as she rocked.  He had seen this before, the living sometimes became broken when the death knights took them.  Their frail minds shattered, clung to words and phrases.  Thats all the sound was, a death cry from a broken mind.

Satisfied he turned back to the prisoner and lifted his sword again.  Yet he paused at the top of his swing.  The sound kept tugging at his mind.  Shaking his head he returned to his task.  He began to swing then paused.  What was his task?  what was he doing?  Why had he been left alone without the comfort of his death knight brothers.  He looked down at the prisoner and couldn't remember what he was supposed to do.  That sound struck at his mind, snippets of scenes flashed before his eyes.   The sound hurt his head, he needed to get away from it.  He stumbled and with a clang he and his sword dropped to the rough wooden floor, as his world went black.

Memories started to trickle back.  Standing atop one of the many windmills and singing as the dawn caressed Thunder Bluff…A sad aria at his sister funeral as he light her funeral pyre.  Hers was one of many at Silvermoon.  He had lost many friends and lovers…Drumming with that cute troll wench at Raventusk, her hair had smelled like apples.  They had watched the sunrise together before…

He woke up and looked at the unfamiliar roof.  He slowly raised himself to his feet.  The prisoners backed away from him in fear.  They hid behind the rusted beds and under threadbare blankets.  He looked down at the unfamiliar armor he wore, it's black metal stained with blood.  He looked franticly for something to anchor his reality.  At his feet lay the corpse of a young troll warrior his ice frosted hand wrapped around the hilt of a great sword.  The runes on the sword called to him begging to be picked up.

He reached down moving aside the trolls warriors hand.  He pick up the sword from where it lay.  As his hand wrapped around its grip he heard the familiar call of the Lich King.  A discordant series of notes falling from atop a frozen glacier.  They spoke of an endless snowy grasp that could not be defeated and would trample any in it's path.  His vision cleared and he felt renewed in his duties to the Lich King.  Kicking aside the corpse he walked outside to ready his departure.  He would kill the slaves and rejoin the main force before dark.

As he patrolled the camp before leaving he paused.  Like wisps of smoke questions began to swirl in his mind.  Why had he blacked out?  What had that sound been?  Surely no young girl could cast a spell that could topple a mighty knight of Arthas?  If she could would it not be prudent to discover how?  Yes he thought, I will keep the prisoners alive till I unravel this mystery for my king.  His tardiness could be excused and maybe rewarded with command.

He returned to the barracks and opened the shabby door.  The prisoners began to shake at his entrance.  Why had he not killed them yet, when would that horrible blow come?  He strode purposefully into the room and spotted the girl sitting in the corner.  He marched up to her his boots striking a deep slow tempo.  She stared at the floor not making a sound, eyes glazed over detached from the world.  She did not see his mighty form before her.

He wondered how to make her reveal the secret of her power.  Would she make the noise again if he threatened her?  He growled and unsheathed his wicked sword.  She sat unmoving.  He raised his arm to strike her, she sat unflinching.  Odd, how might he get her to react?  He thought to threaten her in the common tongue of the living.  He tried to speak and found that only croaks emerged.  There was no need for talk amongst the death knights.  They all felt Arthas's will and obeyed.  He was confused, He knew the languages the living used.  His hand went to his throat and found a scar he could not remember.  Had he ever sustained a wound in battle?  Why couldn't he remember?  Large cold blocks froze his memory.  He remembered the warmth of the memories the sound had unlocked before.  What had this girl done to him?

He sheathed his sword and sat down on the rough wood floor before her.  He couldn't fail, he would be found lacking and sacrificed.  The Lick King suffered no weakness in his army.  Frustration welled up within him, a sob escaped from his throat.  The girl looked up at him seeing him for the first time and recoiled in fear.  Sobs continued to shake the imposing figure of the death knight.  The girl looked at him sadly and slowly inched forward and put her hand on his.  She didn't know what troubled him but whenever she cried her mother would always sing to make her feel better, so she sang.  Warmth flowed into him as she sang.  His sword cried out and he could feel it's icy call but it held no power over the feeling of warmth and growth the girls song held.  A smile crept about his lips as his world went black once again.

His name was Khor'eal he had wandered Azeroth as a bard.  His singing has ensured his safe travel wherever he went.  He had sung on neutral ground with the night elves.  He had even managed to join Sylvanas in song for a moment before her grief forced him to stop.  He received no monetary payment when he sang the open road and a good tavern at the end of the road were all he required.

His feet had brought him to Raventusk village to hear their legendary drummers when the attack happened.  He had preformed most of the evening eventually trying his hand at the drums to a humorous outcome.  A troll woman had been eyeing him all night and he decided to fall back on his other charms for the rest of the night.  They had spent the night and watched the sunrise together when the alarm sounded.  At first it seemed to be an alliance raid  not uncommon and easily dealt with.  Soon sentries were running through the streets shouting about the undead.  Someone thrust swords into their hands and ran off when he tried to protest he knew nothing of fighting.  A scream from the woman caused him to turn.   A corpse had just risen from the ground and had grabber her.  Its rotting arms held her fast as she struggled to get away.  The imposing figure of a tauren covered in plate walked around the corner and quickly ran her through.  The tauren turned to him and gave him a strange look and a icy call beckoned him.  He recoiled in horror, screamed in defiance and clumsily charged at the tauren.  In a flash it whipped its sword around and a burst of pain erupted in his throat.  As he fell into the cold mud he felt the presence of many minds grasp him as the darkness fell.

He awoke with a start he remembered.  He felt such a rush of emotions.  He looked at the young troll girl and smiled.  He rose to his feet and looked around at the prisoners.  He smiled at them and tried to make comforting gestures.  They all still cowered in fear of him.  His hand went to his sword, he felt the icy song of Lich King and for a moment felt as is he might be lost under that avalanche.  The girl held his hand and warmth blossomed and he found the strength to ignore the swords call.  He smiled at her and brought forth the icy blade.  The prisoners trembled and whimpered as they saw him raise the sword to strike.  He brought the sword down upon the troll girls chains and freed her.  He moved around the room freeing the prisoners.  Helping them to their feet as they trembled in their renewed prospect of life.  He opened the door and led them to their freedom.

Several months later after delivering the troll girl safely to Orgrimmar he stood before Thrall himself with several other death knights.  He asked each one to help the horde defeat the Lich king.  When asked if he would join the fight he just slowly shook his head no and laid his weapon upon the ground and walked away.

They say that there is a hut on the plains near Thunder Bluff where a lone death knight lives.  Some say he is a spy for an invasion.   You hear many more stories of injured people saying he has rescued them.   Some days a young troll visits him and you can hear cheerful song's accompanied by the haunting sounds of a flute drift across the plains.

Then the winter came, and the grasshopper died, and the octopus ate all his acorns and also he got a racecar. Is any of this getting through to you?

1:48 pm
January 10, 2010


Agronok

England, UK

Member

posts 43

Agronok had a chance, Agronok was one of the first, Agronok…had gone beyond failure.

Once a paladin of vast reknown, He was one of the first to reach Arthas inside his citadel, he was accompanied by two others, a human mage and a night elf preist (Their names are not important), they were one of the first to reach Arthas.

Agronok led his comrades to Arthas expecting victory, but he underestimated the lich kings swordsman ship and was disarmed and impaled on frostmourne, now here is how Agronok differs from the other Death knights. For one thing he was recruited by Arthas himself and thus had more enhanced powers wereas other Death knights were corpses that were days and sometimes weeks old and bought back to life by necromancers. Also when Arthas 'recruited' Agronok, Agronok still had life force within him, it was so small, so minimal, that Arthas overlooked it, but it was there.

Almost immediatley after being impaled Arthas bought Agronok into the ranks of the scourge, bestowed with the powers of frost, blood and unholy, Agronok turned on his allies and overpowered them in a bloody duel. "This power…It's incredible!!".

Immediatley Agronok in his corrupted state set about causing as much pain and death among the mortals of Azeroth. He would laugh at the pain of others, gladly walk into a battle aware that killing him was neigh impossible.

However on one fateful night, Agronok joined in on the invasion of a settlement belonging to the scarlet crusade, everything went as he planned but then. As he slaughtered the villagers, he came across a young girl no older than six, he smiled cruely and walked towards her, sword raised he was about to strike but the girl muttered "p-please…", this one word reignited the life force within Agronok, His cruelty, lack of mercy, his lust for blood all disappeared. Mortified by his realisation at what he had becme and at his sins he quickley retreated mid-battle, he attempted to recontact the alliance and ask for a chance to redeem himself, but the word that he had sinned moreso than most death knights reached the ears of the alliance who immediatley banished him to exile, he now knows that to redeem himself he must defeat Arthas, but he cannot do so alone, with the Allianmce having banished him he has only one faction he can turn to…the Horde.

"No matter how many times I slash you to pieces you just keep soming back!" ~Zero

11:13 am
January 11, 2010


Nellisynthia

Kamagua Village

Member

posts 22

Post edited 6:32 pm – January 11, 2010 by Nellisynthia


Somewhere out there is a deathknight, whose name is Bavcatha.  Those with an ear for phonetics and old linguistics may be able to untangle the roots of her name.  A dark tale, befitting a dark warrior.

But perhaps not …

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It is like fall lightning, when the bitter thunderheads roll across the midnight sky.  A flash of light suddenly illuminating the winter-borne world, sharp in its clarity, a cruel black and white image that is there and suddenly gone.

It leaves an emptiness colder than ice, colder than nothing.

And that is all there is. No memories, just those momentary images.  Elegant towers reaching into the night.  A fair scuplted contenance, her young forever expression sun blessed.  A martial silouette in brigandine and finecrafted steel, looking into those bright child eyes; an image of trust and promises exchanged.  A reflection in the black surface of a frozen lake shattered like a splintered mirror, of that promise broken by too many scourgeswords.

Simply images.  Nothing else. A collection of alcedemic portraits.

It's all I have.

One cannot feel if one's heart is still.  Passion requires the flow of hot blood.  Perhaps once, if words hold true, in those tales bartered about in taverns before my shadow is cast across the camraderie by the dying hearth, there was a phoenix, a child of the Sindorei with sword bright and true of heart.  But words and steel are not enough to keep promises between siblings.  They say a firebird rises from the funereal pyre, but I reckon that is for heroes only.

From mine came a black crow of battle.

I stand on a hill, overlooking the tall, fanciful towers. I know they are white and gold and crimson, bedecked in banners of vibrant colors.  That the squares of light are saffron shattered into rainbows by stained glass.  In my night, however, all I see are shades of gray.  The rain clatters on my armour, slickening my sword, rolling off pale features, still and quiet.  My steed is restless, uncomfortable upon this pastoral rise, as if any brief moment of peace cuts him deeper than any blade.

Every now and then a flash of lightning turns all into an sharply contrasted engraving.

Behind one of those windows a little girl clutches her pillow, wishing for someone to protect her from the thunder.

I cast my eyes to Northrend, so far away, across mountains and forever frozen snow.

You broke me, Prince of Lordaeron.  Took my life.  Took my soul.  Left me nothing but a raven's carrion call.

You took everything, leaving me with only this sword and a reason to fight.

That was a mistake.

I may be no hero …

… but as long as my little sister lives …

… you will never win.

Mezzy ……………………………………………………………….. FETCH!


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